Don't Give Up - poem
How I wish I could start anew
when I hear the words, "I love you".
I guess I have become so cold,
many words have left untold,
all my feelings seem so trapped...
who could on it like a tap?
Though I'm like ice hard and cold,
I can melt away just like gold.
It will take time to warm my heart
through patience and kindness, that's the art.
I can't be rushed and can't jump start...
if you love me don't give up.
- bee
when I hear the words, "I love you".
I guess I have become so cold,
many words have left untold,
all my feelings seem so trapped...
who could on it like a tap?
Though I'm like ice hard and cold,
I can melt away just like gold.
It will take time to warm my heart
through patience and kindness, that's the art.
I can't be rushed and can't jump start...
if you love me don't give up.
- bee
Labels: perseverence, poem
posted at 2/11/2006 12:09:00 AM |
Name: Bee
4 Comments:
Nice li'l poem. Sweet and touching. Real life story perhaps? :)
Thanks. Hmmn.....
It is a nice poem.
Personally, I think you would be nice and toasty for some one you truly loved - not needing defrosting.
I would further say: Those whose words find in you an icy heart, obviously have not taken the time to try and warm your heart. They act quickly to try and take what they want without appreciating a pearl of great value - a glutton instead of a connoiseur.
Of course, as usual, I may be way off base :-)
Take care.
wow! u have just expanded my poem... hehe... well done! for once u seem to know me well. :P
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